Friday 10 October 2008

Story extracts!

All of these come from a story i wrote for a geography essay,
Enjoy =]

...Alice looked up at the guy holding the gun. ‘Now why’s this familiar? What is it with Psychos and pointing big guns at me? Must be a trend or something.’...

....“Hold your arm out.” The psycho growled.
“Bite me.” Spat Alice.
The Psycho turned red with anger. “Hold. Out. Your. Arm.”
“Go. Jump. Out. A. Window.”
He seemed to forget that he wanted to inject her arm, because next thing she knew, he was stabbing the syringe into her neck. Her last thought was, ‘Jeez this guy should get some aftershave…’...


...“Apparently there’s a birds eye view of the Amazon tour, every hour on the hour. A company called BSS; Best Sight to See, are the owners of the tour.”
“Uh, okay fine, will it take us to Alice?”
“No but I have a plan.”
“Of coarse you do,” Kat huffed.
“Yup.”
“Does it involve breaking, stealing, or generally blowing up, stuff?”
“Definitely.”
Kat sighed and rolled her eyes at him, “Then what are we waiting for?”...



...She was about to do some further research when Daniel came round the corner driving an Aston Martin Vanquish. “Oh my god!” Kat, who’d recently become a car fanatic almost fell to her knees, she ogled at he car, “Daniel, where did you find one?” She murmured.
“I know, great find huh? The owner will hardly miss it: I mean it was extremely funny getting it, anyway who has CCTV, lasers and a massive electric fence to protect a car? Well it was fun evading it.”
“You stole another car.” Kat groaned, her eyes staring hungrily at the car, “But a vanquish Daniel! You know they’re my favourite car! You have to let me drive!”
“No I don’t”
Kat growled and suddenly flung herself into the driver’s seat, which Daniel had jumped out of a second earlier. Which, to be honest, was the best thing to do if he didn’t want to be slaughtered. Kat stroked the driving wheel gently then made a contented noise in her throat before, waiting for Daniel to grab his laptop.
He jumped in, rolling his eyes at her as she stuck her tongue out at him...


...Alice stared at him coldly, “Have I threatened you before? You seem familiar.”...

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...Kat looked around the aeroplane at the people surrounding her. Daniel; grinning manically at the thought of his plan. The plan he wouldn’t tell her. Hmph. There was a short man with a large nose, dressed in a loose but professional suit. A skinny woman who was wearing extremely bright lipstick and had heavy mascara on sat next to her. A tall man who had a pulled sort of look; he looked like he was about to sneeze; permanently. A lean man who was wearing a white t-shirt saying ‘Brasilia World of Paradise’ on it. And then the tour guide; whom had bright red hair pulled into a ponytail and his left ear was pierced three times. He was clean shaven and had dark green eyes; his ears looked slightly sunburned, but other than that he was nicely tanned.
All of a sudden Daniel sprang up and walked towards the cockpit.
“Where are you going?” Demanded the tour guide.
“Going to the toilet.” Daniel flashed his teeth at the ‘guide and pushed his way through the door.
“…But the toilets are down the other end of…”
The plane suddenly lurched downwards and Kat quickly dove into the cockpit to find the two pilots unconscious on the floor of the cockpit. Daniel sat grinning in the captain’s chair, flicking switches and pulling levers.
“WHAT ARE YOU DOING!” Shrieked Kat.
“What does it look like I’m doing?” Daniel pressed a big red button and one of the seats ejected through the roof. Air started streaming in.
“CRASHING THE FREAKING PLANE!” Screamed Kat, grabbing his chair and sucking in her breath as the air in the cockpit got sucked out.
“Yup! I told you the plan involved breaking stuff!” Grinned Daniel tilting his head to one side as if deciding which button he should try pressing next.
“PIG!” Kat yelled before grabbing both pilots and pulling them into the main hanger. The tour guide and the passengers where all sitting down; gripping their seats and wearing oxygen masks. Another lurch of the plane and then the plane started spinning.

The guard looked in interest as the passing plane suddenly dropped in altitude and started flying slightly more towards him… The guard looked at the ‘base, it was an illegal ‘base because hunting chimpanzees was illegal. Since that’s what they did it was obvious that their headquarters nicknamed ‘the base’ was illegal. It was also extremely well hidden; as was their private runway. But that plane was getting awfully close…
He hated animals and especially hated the Amazon; what with all the rare and ‘beautiful’ wildlife it served as a home to. That’s why he’d taken the job. As he watched the plane began twirling madly…
Oh God! The aeroplane was coming straight towards the ‘base in a spiral of doom! He turned just as the plane hit the building. The explosion was phenomenal. There were no survivors.

‘Jeez’ Kat thought looking out the window, ‘where’d the other aeroplane come from? And why’d it crashed into that hidden building?’
“Kat, you wouldn’t happen to know how to land a plane without killing everyone in it would you?” Asked Daniel brightly.
“Nope not a clue.”
“Oh okay, just wondering”...


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...He quickly rushed towards the burning wreckage that was the plane. He jumped inside and quickly checked that the passengers where okay; they were. However Kat wasn’t. She was lying face down on the floor of the aeroplane.
“Kat?” Daniel said softly, “You dead?”
“What d’ya think?” She grumbled weakly, spitting out a mouthful of blood, she pushed herself upwards carefully. Her face was bruised; the left side was turning a horrible purple, but other than that she seemed unharmed.
“Jeez that must hurt,” He smiled at her.
“No duh!” She sat up and then suddenly smacked him across the face.
“Ow!” Daniel complained, “What was that for?”
“For crashing the plane!” She shrieked. Her pale grey eyes contrasted even more with the mangled side of her face; dark purple really set of the light, almost bright silver, tones in her eyes.
“Aw c’mon it was fun while it lasted-”
“PIG!” She yelled, jumping up and storming out of the aeroplane.
Daniel followed her and smiled wickedly as he spotted the small black vehicle.
“Oh Kat…” He slurred her name into two syllables.
“What!”
He flashed his teeth at her; grinning wildly. “That was just phase 1, now for phase 2…”
“WHAT!” Kat turned to stare at him; eyes wide, mouth hanging open in horror.
Daniel jogged off; leaving her gaping at the spot where he’d been standing.
A sudden call from above her made her look up.
“Oh My GOD!” Kat screamed, “YOU STOLE A HELICOPTER!!!!”
“Catch!” Yelled Daniel; throwing down a rope ladder. Kat caught it and began climbing all the while yelling, “I SWEAR; WHEN THIS IS OVER I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!”
When she saw Daniel sitting in the pilot seat expertly controlling the helicopter she punched him hard in the back. “You can fly a helicopter but not an aeroplane!” She hissed.
“Yeah! It’s really luck actually; I mean it came free with a key, autopilot settings, a half eaten chocolate bar and a manual! Great huh?”
“Jerk.”...


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...“Ka-at,” Sang Daniel from the ‘drivers’ seat.
“What?” She bit her lip to stop herself from calling him anything really rude.
“I do believe I’ve found it!”
“Found ‘it’’,” Kat repeated.
“Mhmm.”
“Planning on telling me what ‘it’ is?”
“The place where Alice’s plane landed.”
“WHAT!” Kat ran up to him and looked down at the strip of cleared land.
“Jeez,” Daniel laughed, “How many private runways are there?”
“How can you be sure this is where Alice was?”
Daniel smiled and pointed at his mobile- which was propped on the ‘dashboard’ and had the same map with a red dot on as the laptop had.
“GPS is really very useful.” He smirked at her, “Plus I get free top up!”
Kat shoved him and he laughed; delighted to have annoyed her so much.
“Land.” She demanded, and then a thought struck her.
“Daniel… there aren’t any flight paths charted over this area."

“Hence the word ‘illegal psychopathic kidnappers’,” ...

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...“Daniel is it?” Asked Paul.
“Oops! MY mistake!” Alice grinned, “This is Kaniel and Dat.” She gestured at Daniel and Kat. Daniel snorted and muttered, “Kaniel?”
“Well, if you don’t mind, we want our hostage back; so, give her to us and no one gets hurt.” Paul snapped.
“Well unfortunately we do mind, so drop your guns before I shoot you.” Kat snarled.
“I’ll shoot her.” Paul said, aiming his gun at Alice’s forehead.
“Paul, Paul, Paaaaaauuuuuuuul. Why does that sound familiar?” Daniel asked, completely ignoring the situation and casually waggling his gun around, one second it was pointed at Kat the next at Alice, then at Paul, then at himself.
“Well Agent nine, it would, since you replaced me!” Spat Paul.
“What! I’m not agent nine!” Cried Agent nine in protest.
“Yes, ‘Kaniel’ is unemployed; he’s never been able to get a job… too annoying…” Kat smiled at Paul and rolled her eyes at Daniel.
“Yes, and ‘Dat’ here works at a very fun nightclub in my local neighbourhood...” Daniel said waggling his eyebrows at Kat who gaped at him in shock and utter horror.
“Well agent nine, agent seven,” Paul nodded at Kat, “I have you two to thank for this. If you hadn’t stopped me from stealing all the money from MI6 I wouldn’t have been kicked out! That and the fact that they replaced me because ‘I wasn’t good enough’! I decided I’d repay you by stealing all the money from MI6 via that little pest,” He jerked his thumb at Alice, “and then taking over the world... if I have time.”
“So it was you who stole all that money then was dumb enough to lose it!” Grinned Daniel.
“Yes well, I’m sick and tired of you stopping my plans! Prepare to die!”
“Well that’s friendly.” Alice said...


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...Alice stood under Christ the Redeemer and looked at giant statue. She was so small in comparison. No one here, excluding Kat and Daniel, knew who she was, cared who she was… She felt the same overwhelming power she’d found in the Alps and breathed deeply, looking at the beautiful city around her.
And she realised then. This was a world of beauty, a world full of such amazing things, such amazing people. She knew she was amazing. And she knew that the world needed her. She would be there for the world. She’d help craft this beautiful picture, full of life and love. She would destroy the black stains of hatred and pain. She’d sculpt the world into a better place.
She’d change the world....
Your's Forever
-Sky

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Here's some more:
Jesus Christ was jeered at, tortured, and they mocked him. They gave him a crown of thorns!
Here's a speech I typed up in my spare time:
Do you not know? Do you not know what he has done for you? Do you not know how much he loves you? Do you not know that he was beaten, tortured, and mocked? Do you not know that the lord Jesus, Gods only son, died on the cross for you? He was nailed to a cross, and left there, they put a crown made of thorns on his innocent head, they made him carry a heavy wood cross, but he still loved them, he still loved those that had beaten him and mocked him, he died for you, he died for the worlds sin. Then something beautiful happened, he rose from the dead three days later, holes in his hands, and forgave those people, those people that had yelled and laughed at him, the people that yelled “Crucify him!!!” And what do you do to repay such an awesome god? You ignore him, you say that it can’t be true, you doubt that he is there, you question everything that is said, but worst of all you don’t believe, you don’t believe that he died on the cross for our sins, our souls are as dirty rags compared to the righteous one. No one is righteous, no not one.

It's really all I've been talking about to you. The way to Jesus is simple:
-Admit that you are a sinner and that you aren't perfect
-Beleive that Jesus payed the price for your sins.
-ask him into your heart in prayer

Just bow your head and humble yourself before him, pray, just talk to God.

Anonymous said...

Hey, sandtalon if your reading this, I can't comment on your blog because I don't have a blog or google acount, I like it though, I love both series that your blogging about and I liked how you mixed the two series together. I know I took up a lot of space, oh well. Sky, post soon, like maybe tonight.

Max said...

that was a really cool speech, i wish i could make one but i dont have the spare time like you.

-Max

Anonymous said...

Glad you like it.